- What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
- What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
- Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
- Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
Tuesday, December 14, 2010
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My portfoilio showed time and effort. In my opinion I think that I showed alot of voice in my writings. I think that my best writing was my Oral reading card. I think that I should improve on the organization in my writing. Not just the writing, but in my punctuations and grammar.
ReplyDeleteBryson presented his Power Point assignment to us this evening.
ReplyDeleteQ1: The piece of writing which we liked the best was his Oral Reading Card about the book, the FALLEN.
The reason why we liked it was because he explained the story with clairty and passion.
Q2: What we liked about the portfolio and sharing was Bryson's confidence and level of "comfortablilty" as he presented it.
The areas we feel that Bryson needs improvement in are Organization and Descriptive Writing (more clarity).
Q3: The writing trait that we felt was the most successful for Bryson was Voice. As Bryson explained the conflict that Aaron faced, it grabbed my attention and curiosity.
Q4: In the upcoming semester we would like to see substantial improvment in the areas of Organization. We would also like to see imrovement in the areas of Grammar, Punctuations, and Descriptive Writing.
Overall, we noted that Bryson displayed passion as he presented this to us, and he is able to work well with technology (Power Point). If I were to suggest a letter grade for his presentation, it would be in the range of a "B".