Hey Bryson ! Your pictures are really cute ! They were the first thing that caught my mind when i first saw the poster. I really like the "Welcome to my Universe" title, but im not quite sure that it IS a saying or quote that describes our "Coming Of Age", but then again, i could be wrong. The details of your background blends in well with your pictures and title. Please make sure that you add some words to describe our coming of age & how we come of age throughout out years. & also, i would like to see your pictures a little bigger and clearer to see. Good job on your first poster draft ! You did well.
Hi Bryson! I like that you have so many pictures of yourself! I think it helps that i'm able to identify who the poster belongs to. I agree with Sziezel that your title could be tweaked a bit to show more of a coming of age theme. Or, you could even go deeper into your theme by adding words or graphics that have to do with the galaxy theme, as well as our coming of age theme. Be sure to balance the two themes together! :) I would also suggest to make the focus of your pictures stand out by erasing the background, or changing opacity levels. Good job! -Leah
Hi Bryson, Your teammates have done an excellent job of commenting on your poster and making suggestions. They point out, accurately, that the poster needs to address the topic "Coming of Age" more effectively. I can see that it's about you, but other than that, it doesn't say much about the meaning of COA. I also think that Leah has some good suggestions on the technical aspects of the design. Good luck on the revision :) mrs s
Hey Bryson ! Your pictures are really cute ! They were the first thing that caught my mind when i first saw the poster. I really like the "Welcome to my Universe" title, but im not quite sure that it IS a saying or quote that describes our "Coming Of Age", but then again, i could be wrong. The details of your background blends in well with your pictures and title. Please make sure that you add some words to describe our coming of age & how we come of age throughout out years. & also, i would like to see your pictures a little bigger and clearer to see. Good job on your first poster draft ! You did well.
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Hi Bryson! I like that you have so many pictures of yourself! I think it helps that i'm able to identify who the poster belongs to. I agree with Sziezel that your title could be tweaked a bit to show more of a coming of age theme. Or, you could even go deeper into your theme by adding words or graphics that have to do with the galaxy theme, as well as our coming of age theme. Be sure to balance the two themes together! :) I would also suggest to make the focus of your pictures stand out by erasing the background, or changing opacity levels.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
-Leah
Hi Bryson,
ReplyDeleteYour teammates have done an excellent job of commenting on your poster and making suggestions.
They point out, accurately, that the poster needs to address the topic "Coming of Age" more effectively. I can see that it's about you, but other than that, it doesn't say much about the meaning of COA.
I also think that Leah has some good suggestions on the technical aspects of the design.
Good luck on the revision :)
mrs s